Your partner will give you access to their essay draft, either through google docs, a Word .doc shared via email, or another method that you have both agreed to in advance. Your task is to provide feedback throughout the draft. Identify sentences or phrases that are particularly strong and effective. In moments where the argument seems weak, identify information that is superfluous or contradictory to the thesis. When necessary, correct errors in grammar and spelling. When appropriate, suggest alternate word choices that would improve precision and clarity.
At the end of the document, provide comments in the form of a paragraph that clearly answers all or most of the following questions:
• Did the paper satisfy the expectations raised in its title?
• Was this thesis expressed clearly in the paper itself?
• Can you imagine an intelligent opposition to this thesis? Is so, what?
• Does the author remain true to this thesis through the paper?
• Were there important terms that needed stronger or clearer definitions? If yes, what were they?
• Did the author use citations from class readings and other sources effectively?
• Are there counter arguments that the author should consider in the final version of the paper?
• Name an objection that either should have been addressed or which warranted a deeper exploration than the paper presently provides.
• Were you convinced that the stand taken was the best approach to the topic?
• Comment on the paper’s line of argument (its overall clarity, the smoothness of its transitions and substantiations, the order in which it developed its points, etc.).
• Comment on the paper’s prose (vividness, correct use of language and grammar, etc.).
• Comment on the strengths and weaknesses of the opening and closing paragraphs.
• What qualities did you like best about the paper?
• What is the single most important aspect of the paper that the author should work on before handing it in?
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